My first FC,Dew Vhorer August 1st, 2012, 1:13 pm
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Well,is my first FC,so,any critic will help.(sorry if my english isn't good,im Brasilian...)

Posted @ August 1st, 2012, 1:18 pm

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The head seems to have multiple lightsources, and I think there's too many outlines in the center of the head. The skin color also needs some more contrast, as in I can't tell if some colors are there, but other than that this is pretty well done.

Posted @ August 1st, 2012, 2:20 pm

you should probably stick to at most four or five shades per color. And listen to lux.

Posted @ August 2nd, 2012, 10:14 am

@Luxbot: he might want an emo look

Posted @ August 2nd, 2012, 11:00 am

@sspeedo th:

Doesn't mean there needs to be multiple outlines in the CENTER OF THE HEADDD

Posted @ August 13th, 2012, 7:43 pm

@Luxbot: I thought they were bang s ._.

Posted @ August 13th, 2012, 7:47 pm